Varied Percussion
I love the 0:35-0:40 yelp xD. It's really hard to make a song feel more full out of a 1 minute trance tune, but you did well! I love how you used so many different sounds (if not, it seems like a lot of sounds). You could possibly turn up the percs to stand out because in some points they seemed a little buried. Overall, great listen! (I haven't messed with Mario Paint in ages xP)
The feeling
I have a strong feeling that this could be more brought out with a better set of instruments and effects. I really enjoyed the drumbeat, and the melody accompanied by the bass was perfect. If you could tone it up it would be great, but if it was supposed to be a loop, then it's pretty good. Not too much effort on mastering the little audio piece, but I like the composition nonetheless.
THIS SONG IS AWESOME.
The lead has this indescribable enticement, I don't know if it's automation of the frequency gate or what but it leads this song to an outstanding resonating heart thumping beat that will keep you on your feet.
Age 32, Male
Virginia
Joined on 9/9/05
DbX - Indiscretion 
